Dear Diary,
I need me a man to fulfill this need.
There are things I'd be willing to concede.
He can even leave the toilet seat up,
As long as each night he gives me my fuck.
My bush has been burning for attention.
I just have to relieve this damn tension.
Send me a hard body which has some length,
Which will pump my pussy with all its strength.
A contest entry
- erotica (from the girls POV) by Odd Thomas.
400 points, ended July 5, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oy....
can you hear me crunching and munching the Pringles?
laney
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Hahaha I love it. Nice sense of humor : )
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lmao
Oh yes, I believe men actually believe we think this way, haha but we have much classier names for our hoOha~ than bush.
Delila
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Yes... I have heard some 'classy' ones.
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Oh my word lol
Clicks on this and was thinking it would be something different boy was I wrong thanks for sharing good luck -
lol all that Sandwich making is going to your head... kewl love it
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Wonder if you picked words..
...and thoughts from a women diary?
congrats.
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chuckles...what is in those sandwiches you are making
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oh my this is hot and sexy throughout good luck inthe contest maralisa
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Right on! I normally don't like this kind of erotica but yours always has this special zing that makes it worth reading!
Kari
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zing zing zing
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What a freaking excellent title.
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That was good! I loved reading this, kinda sexy... Although I have to admit, no matter how good the fuck.. I'll be damned he leave that toilet seat up! Great write sweetie! Good Luck in the contest!
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Hey that sounds like the real deal!
well nothing out of my Diary! Great Job!
R
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LMAO! You go bro!
Thanks a lot for this laugh and good
luck in this contest. I wish you well bro!
Jeremy0826
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ROTFLMAO
Yep okay..
glad this poet doesnt act that way...
Great job
Passions
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well sensually erotic and I loved it 
great rhyme and flow thats a breeze of a touch
Good luck and best wishes
Julie
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