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Tied

You chose an electrical fire
your so religious
your body is
what I desire
but your privy
to my existance

your heart is
dying inside
I am something
you can't fight
missing me
over and over again
your not that hateful

I tried (tried) to  (2x)
die just for you
but we're tied (tied)
only by fear,of love...

I love you more,than I'm allowed
it's just too stressful
acting like your not around
it's too painful...

I drive you back to your house
but your ungratful
You let me look down your blouse
but your face looks regretful

I tried (tried) to  (2x)
die just for you
but we're tied (tied)
only by fear,of love...

I'm laying on
your bed
watching you undress
theres no fucking anger

we are now face to face
theres no time to waste
tracing your feet up to your waist
my hearts beating at a faster pace

we make haste and lay in your bed
our lust shall be fed
with nothing more to be said
we create a future
where will we be led?

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  • Sarin Rayne
    June 14

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    Dear Dante,this is such a wonderful write.You have such a gift my friend.I love the way you write and I am thankful that I know you and got a chance to read your works