I have found myself
bedazzled
unable to comprehend
surreal-
grossly enchanted
in a reckoned
yet vibrant realm
I travelled,
unknowingly to
The Land of Misfortune
overwhelmed,
unimagined
a cricket grabs my hand.
"Welcome, my guest...
we have be awaiting your arrival.
Feel me, smell me;
can you taste betrayal?"
An insect,
quite large, like me...
very creepy in sorts
pus filled, green blemishes
surrounding his lips;
wreaking of stale cigarette
and raunchy sex
I cringe,
as a quiver runs
down my spine.
I shake out of his
grasp,
gathering my thoughts,
"waiting? for me? who are you?
quit humping my leg!"
"my name? call me Sid...
you really make my 'mojo' flow-
Your scent makes me horny,
so pretty, you know?
follow me.
It's time to awaken-
open your blind eyes
to the birthplace
of evil;
where love doesn't exist"
Pinching my leg
trying to escape,
the scum bag cricket
chuckles with my unease.
"Feeling... nauseated?
to your left you will find
the factory of dis-ease..."
a smoke stack pluming
clouds of purple and orange.
"this is where we create
new viruses, and bacterias
that will eat beings from
inside and out through
the skin-
and that drainpipe?
that is cancer pouring
out.."
a river of green toxins
runs by my feet,
"and this, this is
the ultimate,"
pointing up a shale hillside,
"this is what you "Humans" eat.
fast-food, processed, all the dye
and salt... honestly? you didn't think
you Beings came up with it yourselves!"
I see it standing tall,
surrounded by shadow-
a rock table,
and chairs-
Elementals gathering around....
concocting and jotting
recipes of disaster-
then something strikes me;
the beating of a drum
wrapping faster and harder
ahhhh- this journey....
is almost done.
I look into the creature's eye,
then jab it quickly with my thumb.
I twist and I pry,
until it comes out-
"Now I know,
and I'll return...
next time I will bring with me, an army"
"An army? you will never conquer us,
darling...
you humans breed fear"
"with my army, I will bring LOVE!!!!"
and with that being said,
my protectors sent me a dove.
I jumped on her back
I flicked off the ick,
hitting the bug,
"you stupid girl!!! we will win!
we will get you!"
and away we flew-
up, up, up into blue.
The moral of this tale,
is always be complete-
surround oneself with light
and ask protection from
your fleet...
An astral travel may seem as fun
but jimmy up against
lower vibrations;
I was lucky,
I survived this one.
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wonderful write. quite ...very..long! great story. filled with rhythm. thank you very much for entering and sharing your amazing talent. keep writing! God bless you always
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noun 1. a shifting series of phantasms, illusions, or deceptive appearances, as in a dream or as created by the imagination.
2. a changing scene made up of many elements.
3. an optical illusion produced by a magic lantern or the like in which figures increase or diminish in size, pass into each other, dissolve, etc.
grazi a dictionary.com.
someone told me once that sometimes you have to go down before you can go up..me.i go down and up fairly regularly..remind me to tell you about the star-digms.
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whoa!..dude!..what wild little journey yu just took me on there..i could totally see it!..feel it..all that..you've been busy!
phantasmagoria..the word that popped into my mind as reading..i dont recall the exact definition, but i'm gonna look it up!
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phantasmagoria:
thanks a bunch!!! I had a lot of fun with this one; yes it is long winded at times, but it had to be- otherwise I'd a had to skip things....
this is one of those "to be continued" epics
later in due time, I will add another part.
yippeee! Gotta love imagination!
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most inspiring! i really like the composition though it felt a little winded at times....good job though!
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-poor boy,
deserves more....
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poor boy,
deserves more....
more what?? you've got me pondering....
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This was very very wild .....
like alice in wonderland on blue sunshine...
but this did go a big step further..
it really took the reader along....
just a very cool progression of images
and very well written.
Graet job lass!
Liam -
I like it
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I dig this poem!
I've never had a bad trip, and I hope I never do, because bugs scare the shit out of me and if one as tall as me was humping my leg I tottally skitz out, but I really like this piece, and all the imagery, not to mention your minds eye perception of disease toxins cancer hate and horridness in general.
I tottally dig this!
Great write!
exOHex
Brea
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Very Cool!!
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