The sun rises above earth’s rest
With a smile that takes away one’s breath
& the joy that is as cold as the ice bricks
Gently my heart warm up to your sleep
U positioned your body fatally,
as the rays of warmth & love flourish in me
Fresh dew drops of love quenching my thirst
Whilst the morning birds chirp in their nests
Loving the way you positioned your body to sleep
& to my knees my body dropped to rests
& my love for you I truly & unconditionally profess
I enjoyed the motionless, and the calmness
Your smile shines even in your peaceful dreams
& to your surprise you find my tongue
Slowly streaming through your silky skin
Softly I caress your body like a slow flowing stream
my heart restlessly beats against my lungs
a hum slips out, to my princess I sung, for
I have been given the sweetest princess to love
a princess to cherish, to hold to take me above
& the sun rises above earth’s rest
With a smile that takes away one’s breath
& the joy that rises above my heart
With rays of warmth love from the start
So a vow to my soul I make for our love
Form you my sweet princess I will never depart
Please tell me what you think?
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This is so beautiful , its very tender yet i like that you added a taste of sensuality to it.
You have become an amazing writer my friend.
I think now i should be the student...
For i lack in writing for a while.
Great work,
~Lisa~
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LISA
You do not lack in writing and quite frankly, I have learned more from you in writing styles that actually are liked by many and preferred my a bunch. I am amazed by your talent and reading your work makes more of a student because I learn different styles from you since you have been my AP mentor. I just wish that I could continue to write more like this. Well God bless your soul and have a wonderful late night and Say hi to your son the next time you talk to him, when does he come home from Iraq?
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