If I never see you again
I have something to say.
If this roller coaster breaks
And launches us to an untimely death
There's something you should know.
Now it may seem like a shock
But I... I...
I left my sandwich in the oven!
Author notes
My chosen title is #124 If I never see you again. I like it, though it isn't really very poetic. It starts a cliche, but ends in a humorous way. But who ever puts their sandwich in the oven?
A contest entry
- After tonight we'll never turn away. by Antebellum.
1100 points, ended June 25, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So? What do you think?
Comments
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Another great one!!!! This is very nicely done and inspiring!!! Thanks so much for the share here! Best wishes in the contest.
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lol.
I was reading this thinking
"wow the first two lines are stunning. it has so much meaning to it"
then I get to the end and I couldnt quit laughing.
haha excellent take on this.
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Wow, you are quite the random! I love it, especially the roller coaster being the implement of possible death, it gives a great image. I really like this one, it's just very fun and creative. Ha ha, I knew you could do it!
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lol..very cute!
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