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History Repeats

Maybe it's me who hasn't changed,
But maybe you're the same old word smith;
Luring me in,
Then changing your mind.

Maybe we're more alike than we knew,
You've learned to do what I never could;
Masking the feelings,
You're seemingly numb.

Maybe there's no one else to blame,
Just you and I and human nature;
Like old times,
Things never really changed.

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  • intersting the flow of this was a little choppy but i really like the message and the tone of this piece....let me know when u revise this