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Trip to simple ( a fairy's perspective)

Washing away from the shore
of beautiful marshy homeland
I am not afraid, but excited,
to see everything in this realm.

I'm excited to see all the creatures
small or big, new or old, I am pleased
I stare into the pond-like water, but
drifting underneath gray-blue stones

is oddly just as lovely as the fish I see
to me every part of this is wonderful!
This world has been created to amaze
and I shine through the night traveling

on my comforting lily pad full of flowers
and connected to the stem of all of them
is my lantern to guide me through night,
on my way to see what others haven't.

My wings on my back are a quick trip,
but it's not as fun as this midnight slip
along the waves I take a break myself
just looking at stars,moons, and shells.

The woodland trees hangover me,
like a blanket of protection and leaves
their texture making me feel at ease,
faster the water bubbles and I find myself

flowing quickly without much trouble!
I am glad for this bank of sand and grass,
for as long as I'm near it and have pixie-dust
I know that in myself I can always trust.

Dreams of magical spells are entertaining
to everyone, but those who can have them
I much prefer the simple things in your life
stones amuse me more than magical thrones.

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by tikigirl

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Comments

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  • glassrose11
    June 17
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    amazingg

    i could really feel the magic in this piece nice job


  • She burns
    June 14
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    My magical pixie!!!


  • glenn shannon silver member
    June 9

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    little faries annoy me like mossies give me rocks any day then when i finish examaning their beautity i throw em at the fairies lol loved this art tho it was sweet as


  • Violinstrings silver member
    June 9

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    a beginning to a wonderful story
    good it does describe the pic very well too.
    good job
    like bank of sand and grass
    stone amuse me more than magical stones
    just a good idea for pic

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