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Take Over

this bad attitude
plagues me
i just want to feel
JOY
i just want to see
Your will
to be changed
to have Your heart
God
so overpower
this dark will
of mine
my life hurts
so take over
my Savior

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  • ScarsFade
    June 9
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    i like it simple and strong... please keep writing you ahve a great talent...much <3....scars.