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Sun Showers

Skin-moistened, garden-scented,
A summertime deluge illuminated.

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I had to write my own imagist poem (think Ezra Pound) for a class. Here it is.

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  • dx d by me
    June 9

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    "illuminated" is such an important word for this piece, it makes this buoyant, light, floating on the aromas you present with "moistened skin, garden-scented and summertime deluge" . I enjoyed this very much. Geo