You are indeed an incredible one
Thank God someone else found the words
You know exactly what to say when i'm down
and care enough to pick me up when i've fallen
You have the craziest way of looking at the world
and make me loose my problems when i look upon you
When you hold me close i feel safe and warm
Protect me now and always...
You make me incredibly jealous when other girls look upon you
And it makes me thankfull you've come back to me
I've just lost myself for a little bit
But stay please, and help me look
A contest entry
- an incredible one... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended June 10, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
can you understand what I am trying to ask?
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what a wonderous poem of love and devtion! your words are so full of joy even in times when you speak in anger
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thank you and there was me thinking my recent few poems were shit (excuse my language)...
thanks for your critique..xx
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Humm..this is intimate poetry connecting with HIM and making things conveyed..love the honesty of the words..thank you so much for sharing..
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Thank you for your comment.. i loved the quote.. not sure the poem was entirely up to scratch
love,
lisa..xx
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