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The Let Down

Its always one thing
Or another
I don't even know
Why I bother
You're just always
Letting me down

I am nothing
To your something
And you're not even bothering
To look around
To see that
I'm burying myself in the ground

My tears fall
And I know
That you don't understand it
But I guess I deseve it
I'm just letting you down

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  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    June 9
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    shorter than your average poem, but straight to the point. i like it lots