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misunderstood..

bleeding throughout these troubled times
of obduration and abnegating lives
losing ourselves within the hollow cries
inside the halls of congregating lies

praying for an answer
hoping for an escape
decaying from the agony
inside this surreal cage
stripped of our wings
torn from the spires of grace
ripped of our faith in this world
driven into a dark, empty space

no love
nor forgiveness
for those who've refused us
the happiness
and light
has deteriorated from our minds
nobody can save us
from the blackness that consumes and creates us
into what nobody comprehends with
or accepts into their lives

unorthadoxed and abused
stone hearted and confused
heartbroken and used
we're the freaks of society
your comprehension a myth
we're driven into a black pit
from the labels you *bunny*
we're the mistunderstood

theft of our innocence hides in underneath
all these creases of misery on the surface of our sheets
stained by blood red ink spilt from the tubes 'neath our flesh

what did you think? how did you feel?

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  • LionessK silver member
    June 12
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    I love the wording in your first stanza. All of your words flow together well with rhythm and feeling in each line. Wonderfully put together.
    Thank you for sharing your thoughts and words here with us all. I hope you will continue to do so.

    Enjoy the site.