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Two Stripes.



two white stripes
on the badger trail--
fading




Andrew Hide
17~03~2004

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Written March 17th, 2004

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  • March 25, 2004
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    it's all a black and white world


  • Sprite silver member
    March 19, 2004
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    Looks like fog inside my head, or perhaps sunset. All that remains is the brightest spot, two white stripes disappearing. You are really terrific at creating entire scenes with a few words! Great, Andrew.

    ~Joyce


  • BillS2
    March 17, 2004
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    Fun

    Hi Andrew:
    Then, you are going to have to move faster than that. LOL. Interesting write to say the least. But fun, I can tell, however you won't catch the beast. Bill


  • Kitesen
    March 17, 2004
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    So that was what awakened, not much food yet I suppose.
    Just like I asked myself this afternoon where "my" hedgehog family has gonne. They were with 5 late this winter.
    Think they have to walk the line like yours.