0:04 late evening airs…
where your eyes, captured in fires, linger, then away, cast upon clouds sailing to our song two gifts of love, memories in trailing summer nights… sing to you singing…
of the warm August days to come.
thinking of August, with you in the warm August days with you…
1:08 June suns move, slowly move,
where we'll be together, again.
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Author notes
be sure to try it to the melody... (open your browser a second time and copy the link into the address bar) "Sweet August Days to Come" orchestrated arrangement rework # 32 by me
Part of the "Thinking of August" Series:
Thinking of August- Now or Never
Thinking of August- Acoustic Grand Piano
Thinking of August- Duo (piano and cello)
Poems/Scores to the Music of Random Goldfish:
(in reverse chronological order)
Thinking of August- Now or Never http://allpoetry.com/poem/5893739
Thinking of August- Duo (piano and cello) http://allpoetry.com/poem/5660705
Thinking of August- Acoustic Grand Piano http://allpoetry.com/poem/5892115
Thinking of August- Electric http://allpoetry.com/poem/5435359
Sweet August Days to Come http://allpoetry.com/poem/5423787
Sometimes... Faces http://allpoetry.com/poem/4940637
The Moon Tonight- Christmas from Ireland http://allpoetry.com/poem/4895079
Then the Merry Fiddlers Came http://allpoetry.com/poem/4885481
'Round a Grand Carousel http://allpoetry.com/poem/4778751
Two Souls Rooted Deep Within http://allpoetry.com/poem/4776245
A Dream- Where the Water Sleeps http://allpoetry.com/poem/4756347
Lune Sings http://allpoetry.com/poem/4397931
Gas Pump Music Duel http://allpoetry.com/poem/3449548
Chained in Silver http://allpoetry.com/poem/3385242
A New Autumn Day http://allpoetry.com/poem/3308104
Merry Merry Wiccan Wiccan Friends http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3293000
In this Wilderness a Love of Old http://allpoetry.com/poem/3244044
The Sable http://allpoetry.com/poem/3239364
Donkey Feathers http://allpoetry.com/poem/3238828
The Obsidian Tree http://allpoetry.com/poem/3059430
The Forest Altar http://allpoetry.com/poem/2648314
The Snowy Banks http://allpoetry.com/poem/2646132
(some scores modified by me)
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A serenade of entrancing love
A serenade of love in the hues of summer. With August as focal point, this love is warmed by a passionate sun that brings it fiery heart into moments spent together. What an experience you two have created for the reader! Two distinctly different creative mediums melding into one, the best of each enhancing the other, explosive in their interlude, calming in their vicissitude, much like the love you describe. What an entrancing love it is.
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as long as it took you there...!
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hmmmm...clever and romantic...nice combo
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it's the color of my glasses...
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i liked this it was nice
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thanks, I'll that that as a good sign (from someone usually negative...!)... maybe the piece is almost there...
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beautiful, i read it once without listening to the song, and again while listening. its great either way.
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thanks for the response, my young idealist (who likes King Crimson)...
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i like the way you formatted the poem and the way it flows and the repitions are interesting and the imagery is great.
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thanks, the repetitions are melody-driven here...
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great melody to set this up with. I read it through the first time without the melody but once you get the tempo from the song to put the words to you can capture what inspired you to write this poem. very nice job
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thanks, and after a few more suffix and punctuation changes the rework goes on...
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This is such the whispy romantic read flowing down the page like a feather floating through the air just waiting for a dream to land on.
Nicely composed!
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thanks, and you wouldn't believe all the sweat it is taking in trying to achieve something as simple as lightness...
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this is full of creative energy! very nice. great job. I enjoyed it very much. thank you for sharing. Keep up the great work. Peace and light, KP
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thanks, and the nice part here is that we can get reactions, and just keep working on a piece until the reviews are steady raves (which requires more magic than skill, and hence, is sometimes never achieved)...
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very well done. i am happy to have clicked on this write as it made my day a bit brighter. thank you for sharing and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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thanks, we fight darkness, and what better way than with lightness...
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what a new twist on how you want the reader to flow with the writing, they begin to feel what they are reading...great job. Enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing your work with us
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thanks... "uncharted poet", hmmm... makes me want to change my name to "the dabbler", to reflect my situation...
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that was amazing
its very lovely
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What a romantic you are
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lol thanks- hopeless, yes... and I hope you were able to read it to the melody, and if so, that you were carried away on currents of dreams...
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WOW.. you two just impressed the hell out of me!!
words.. music.. perfect for each other!
you've knocked me speechless.. enough said
laurie
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ah, to be knocked speechless...
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I couldn't quite follow it the first time...but the words are damn near perfect to what the song is about! I LOVE it!
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oooo thanks- following is very important- don't want to lose the reader... I'll work on that... and glad you like... no, love it...
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