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The end....

The whispers in the corridor
Something they cant hide
I cant live like this
Hiding all the time

What have I done wrong?
Is it that I'm alive
So many questions race
Through my mind....

I'm sick of smiling
I'm sick of trying
In the end
I know it doesnt matter

I run through the corridors
Hiding my face
To the only place
I can torture myself

Pull the scissors out
Lift my sleeves up
Make little ones
That I can make dissappear

They follow me in there
Wishing to know the gossip
Of why the 'emo' girl
Is crying?

Hours go on
Silence
No-one speaks
To me

In the end
I know I tried
But somethings
You can never win...

Author notes

this is just sort of a random one...sorry if it doesnt make sense...

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  • Well Written

    You did a great job making me feel like im in that position. Although I actually was I have stopped cutting but it was so hard especially with everyone calling you emo. Great job continue writing you can go far

  • it does make sense and it has alot of emotion and truth. i really like it and hope things are alright.
    well written

  • Awwwwh *huggs!*
    Hun, you gotta do something about those stupid bullies they cant rule your life like this. Don't let them get to you, I know its hard cause Im dealing with the same crap too. But when they say something. Ignore. Ignore everything they say! I do..but deep down it bothers me. And sometimes I say stuff back. But you gotta stay strong. You only have a few more months left once its september. So keep your head held high. Great write though Shanice. Keep it up!

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