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Murky

a reflection in the water
a dark ripple
many eyes flicker
the light dim and filthy
pools made of shadows
disgusted, repulsive
lurking under the surface
watching, waiting
for you to call
wishing, wanting
for you to fall
because here
living isn't an option

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June 3, 2009

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