When the world with time has wilted,
made blurry through our aging eyes,
there'll be a face made brighter still,
that will shine among sombre skies.
And when the trees have lost their green,
when birdsong seems to slowly fade,
there'll be that gentle whisper still,
which in the wind will serenade.
When all around us seems to groan,
when all the songs have now been sung,
come home, you'll find a face there still,
a face you've loved since you were young.
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Wow! Very beautiful poem...You write quite well!
Thank you for sharing..
Cheers!
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Oh, this is a truly beautiful poem!
What tender words with so much love inflused... 
I thank you for honoring us with your talent, good poet. 
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made blurry through our aging eyes ...very beautiful
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bittersweet words that emerges with such beauty. Awesome beautiful write Kiran.
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Outstanding
There is some great imagery in this poem which really sets it apart. This has great flow and a subtle rhyme scheme that works perfectly. The world can be dark and uninviting place and it is our loved ones who bring us into the light and make us feel just that little bit special.
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Oh, such a sad and beautiful, yet, also, loving and hopeful poem! The second and third stanza I thought were exceptional!!!
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A wonderful love poem ,never expected anything other from your well of love
Excellent
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a soft and sighing piece here, full of love and splendour, aye, time may fade but love will still be waiting. a good poem.
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You can be REALLY proud of this beautiful poem, good poet. It is wonderfully penned with rhyming that I admire. The images are superb and I love the message.
May I please post this onto Poetry Planet? 
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