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Self Harm

Hurting
Pain
Why?
Infilct pain upon yourself?
When others do it already

Cutting
Slicing
I wil never understand

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Self explanitory

A contest entry

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  • reckless abandon
    June 21

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    "Why?
    Infilct pain upon yourself?"

    I really like questions within poems but I thought that the question mark after Why was unecessary and broke the flow of the poem. Thanks for entering!