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This is actually a song. When I trip you always laugh.

Welcome to my mind,
a wilted wonderland in time.
so have fun,
kid you betta run.

Kiss me tonight,
a puppet show on the inside,
little better than a lie.
but I'll be alirght.
Dont,
touch my heart again,
your all to greedy in the end,
I get fed up,
I've had enough.

What pretty,
La-la-lies you tell,
oh damn you whisper pretty well,
but you cut me up,
oh hon it wont be enough.

Kiss me tonight,
a puppet show on the inside,
little better than a lie.
but I'll be alirght.
Dont,
touch my heart again,
your all to greedy in the end,
I get fed up,
I've had enough.

Write me an ending,
Hell I go tno way a-spending,
all this time,
yeah its on my mind.

Im trying so hard
not to care,
catching roses,
in my hair
but I wake up,
and its just not enough
so,

Kiss me tonight,
a truthful lie on the inside,
little better than a touch,
I cant get enough,
dont,
let go of me again,
what if our world was gonna end,
I dont want to go,
without holding you so,

cause you,
look at me like that,
n-when I trip
you always laugh,
I make mistakes,
you never hesitate,
pull me into you again,
cause I dont ever want to pretend,
that I am done.

oh yes its so messed up,
but I just cant ever get enough.

this isnt really that much of a personal thing, but tell me what you think.

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  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    June 10
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    w-o-w.
    this is amazing! mixed emotions now... it's rlly good.

    kAsSIE


    • Frikyeah
      June 17
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      Haha, thanks! Im glad you liked it!
      um, yeah haha, very mixed up person am I. lol.
      thanks again!
      -Emm