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Under Darkening Clouds



Darkening clouds
gathering like smoke from burning tyres.

Pinpricks at the eyes,
tears falling, like needles from the pine.

Sight is obscured.

Breathing sticks and claws.

Still, I survive.

Feel free.

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  • Nice write Don, I too, feel like I'm under a dark cloud...mystic


  • Quantum-suff
    June 22
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    Yes I like it.

    Thought it was that bloke Button telling what it's like roaring round the track.
    R.