I feel and hear,
The ocean's wave's.
As they come closer,
To the ocean's shore.
The sand once dry,
Is now wet.
For the tide rolled in,
Took all the shell's with them.
Back out into the ocean,
Early morning I shall rise.
New sea shell's there shall be,
That we can see and get,
As we walk along the ocean's beach.
Once again I now feel at peace,
And harmony once more again....
By: Brenda Gae Harper
June 9, 2009
Author notes
I take your Contest extreemly serious, As well as hope and pray that it is a good one as well as experiance for you !!
A contest entry
- another waste of points by sheltered.
600 points, ended June 17, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well I thought this was awesome. One minor spelling mistake. "harmoney" is harmony. I bet you typed in a hurry. The words you used described a night I can see in my head. Thank you for taking me there. I would have turned in "sheltered" for talking to you like that. That was horrible & very uncalled for. I think the coloring was good as well.
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Peaceful!
This is a peaceful poem. I love the ocean, and the beach. This poem has grand imagery, and is very beautiful! I enjoyed this very much...
Love & Light
Debbera
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Very nice entry you have penned, it speaks of renewal and the hope in all new beginings.
I like it, I like it so!
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