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afterthought..

I wanted to be your witness.

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for the man who im thinking about..

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    June 22
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    I love the way this is worded


  • Night Hope gold member
    June 9
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    This reminds me of the old song by Sam Brown, The Stones & Marvin Gaye, too..."Can I Get a Witness?" It shivers with innate longing, Sweetie. See? You nailed it all with only a single line...Your poetry rocks, Lady. Good luck in the contest, my Friend.




  • faderman1959
    June 9
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    Lots of longing and feelings of melancholy is so few words. Well done and good luck!