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The lure of a goddess's secret

Such erotic velvety smooth.
Yet what I touch I do not see.
Inviting pink and downy folds,
I know not, care not what they be.
Soft indiscretion I give in,
To taste that swollen mystery.
Senses filled with pure feminine.
Though long awaited, all for me.
Labels and thinking have passed by,
Them be damned, I am free.

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  • dutch2lips gold member
    June 10
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    almost like you are coming out
    i love de second line, sweet write, thank you for entering