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Health food gone right

Sunken teeth
into ripe fruit
juice drizzles,
down my lips.

Exploding happily
in a perfect taste
of citrus confection
absolute crispness!

Fibery feelings
mixed in sweet
sweet satisfaction
of health food-
gone right!

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