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what no one else sees

lovely lovely,
you seem to be
i can see you hiding
i can hear you scream

desperate desperate,
what are you trying to portray
holding on to anything
waiting for another day
it doesn't matter. . . .  

alone,
i've noticed that you
don't let anyone near
what are you afraid of
society today?
fuck it they don't see the tears

the whispers get louder
what are they trying to say?

get away from it all
keep doing what you've done
runaway runaway

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Written March 17th, 2004

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  • IceHeartedEvil
    August 14, 2004
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    hooray

    Great Poem I love it yay step u know that almost sounds like a song sorta in a way that's it's not oo well I really like it.

  • ChicaneryInc
    March 29, 2004
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    Me likeys..yes we do! Okay yeah, great poem! ^.^ Keep up the good work.
    -Lillith