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What have i done?

Fear fills my heart, freezing my chest
Horror builds up in my throat, choking me
My vision blurrs as my eyes fill with tears
I can barely make out my own shaking fists

A sob rips from my chest,
Tears are now falling freely down my face
My body jerks into convultions from my place on the floor
My head thudding as it hits the ground, telling my mind its time to shut down

As the darkness comes
And my world fades to black
I think back on the hours before

My God what have I done?

Author notes

Hey Im back! This is the first time I have written again in about 6 months so I hope it's okay. I had forgotten how fun this place was .

I hope you like this, please tell me if you find any spelling mistakes Word died on me earlier this week. enjoy

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  • Ez Writer silver member
    September 22

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    Welcome back Micaela ! A very intense
    and evocative poem , grrreat penning !!
    Thank you for sharing a pleasure to read indeed ..
    Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy

    • Aww thank you sorry I took so long replying im not on often hopefully ill get back into writing soon I havent had much time lately, x thanks for commenting

  • OMG wow...this is just completely amazing. I adore it. I could see everything happening in my head, and it was just so vivid. I love it. Great job! (P.S. I feel that way too sometimes)

  • Welcome back ! !

    This is a rather confronting, dark write, but it's good to see you back again. Well penned

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