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in the dark; forever

in the dark i can see forever
on and on
and on, and on
forever
and past forever,
though what is past forever
nobody knows,
because nobodys ever made it that far,
but there must be something past forever
more of the dark?

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  • Kira65
    June 9
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    It is a good poem, but i feel that it could have been much more then what it is!