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at a loss

I don't know how to tell you
that apologies are useless
and forgiveness in vain.
Your soul will not be
cleansed just from
standing in the rain.

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  • Lowell Poe
    July 29

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    Now this I love lass...
    short like Yeats...
    with a punch..
    it had a.. I had enough... kind of feel to it..
    I do not say lightly,
    this is very good.


    Bless your heart
    little gypsy,
    Liam


  • PorcelainHope
    July 21
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    A short and sweet piece.