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My Son Forever

Tears of love
Are tasted sweetly as
A heart begins to beat
Brand new
A first breath is taken
Cries errupt from within,
Rejoice, Rejoice a new
Son lives!
So small to hold, my gaze
Fixed upon your perfect
Eyes, nose and precious lips.
To watch you is an endless
Pleasure, A mothers heart
s.k.i.p.s.. with each  new
Smile, touch and milestone
measure.
Whispered at the f
                              a
                                l
                                  l
of night, I love you, And a
Lullaby to say goodnight, No longer,
Me, Its for you, My little treasure, My son
Forever...

Author notes

This poem is deticated to my 11 week old son Lucas, Mommy loves you!

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  • Grrg
    June 9, 2009

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    This is great. New children always have an amazing effect on a family. Great piece. I like the setup and I wish you and your son the best!

  • Pisces rainbow
    June 9, 2009

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    a precious baby,
    a time in life where our purpose transforms us.
    it takes away self and is replaced by a precious priority
    this is just lovely
    and beautifully written
    God bless you my friend...