Wandering the lonely street,
Waiting for a voice so sweet,
To call out and capture my attention.
Wandering along the path,
No one seems to feel my wrath,
But why is beyond my comprehension.
Author notes
A poem I wrote in my poetry basics class, rhyming. :] I hope it makes sense because I enjoy it.
Option; a little bit of journey & a little bit of hope.
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I hope you earned high marks for it for it was truly enjoyable and understandable! I want to thank you for your entry into the following contest: "To Be Put On My Favorites List."
Ted E
PS: Your entry has been blessed by the three wise clappers, but don't spend the whole nine points in one place(lol)!
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option please.
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Sorry, there you go.
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a very sincere poem.
"No one seems to feel my wrath,
But why is beyond my comprehension."
beautiful yet painful lines. great job
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I love short poems, they're my favourite. This is amazing, nice write. :]
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I love short poems because my attention span is short lol. I love this poem, and rhyme happens to be my favorite. I think that this is a great write actually.
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I don't usually go for short poems that also rhyme, but this completely changes my mind. Great job, you managed to say what was needed in just a few good lines!
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