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Just a Poem In a 4 Second Mind Confusion I Had

IF YOU GOT TIRED OF ME
GO AWAY, DON'T CRY.
IF YOU GOT TIRED OF YOUR LUCK
FORGET, DON'T GET SAD

UNEXPLAINED REASONS AND SLEEPLESS NIGHTS
YOU MADE HEART SORE FROM ALL THE FIGHTS.

COLD AND HOT KISSES AND THE ENDLESS PROMISES
I DON'T WANT TO LISTEN ANYMORE.

GO AWAY! GO AWAY! GO AWAY FROM MY LIFE
SO I CAN CALL YOU AGAIN

DON'T STAY! DON'T STAY! DON'T STAY NEXT TO ME
SO I CAN MISS YOUR LOVE

IF YOU LOVE ME A LITTLE
GO AWAY DON'T HURT ME

IF YOU FEEL A LITTLE SORRY FOR ME
FORGET ME, DONT GET SAD

COLD AND WARM REASONS
SILENT SIGHT AND TEARFUL EYES

THE TIME HAS COME
I DON'T WANT TO INTERFERE

GO AWAY FROM ME LEAVE ME ALONE
THIS MIND OF MINE,  A DEVIL PERHAPS
LOVE, PAIN, TORTURE, I AM DONE

A TEARDROP FROM MY EYE
WHAT A FLASHBACK I JUST HAD

DO I LOVE YOU? OR IS IT JUST A SCAR
NOPE, NOPE, IT WAS JUST AN AMNESIA FROM THE SMOKE OF CIGAR.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    June 22

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    Good to write down these thoughts just appear out of nowhere - liked the emotions you transmit well through these words - sentiments expressed clearly and with passion.
    Four second mind confusion resulted in a poem that many can relate to.


  • Findecano
    June 8
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    Worth the read and a cracking write Congrats
    Really loved the last couple verses xD! Really moved me gotta be said

    "A TEARDROP FROM MY EYE
    WHAT A FLASHBACK I JUST HAD

    DO I LOVE YOU? OR IS IT JUST A SCAR
    NOPE, NOPE, IT WAS JUST AN AMNESIA FROM THE SMOKE OF CIGAR."

    Really like that