With the tears shed I step in the warth
The scared feeling goes away
My life means every tear shed
I breath easy as I cry hard
With a cross in my hands I mumble a prayer
I felt like someone cared
I finished as a tears rolled down my face
I saw a hand as I fell to my knees
My grandma appeared as I hold her tight I cry hard
She holds me in her warm that i have missed for 4 years
I tell her I was sorry for the time I yelled at her
I cry because I never told her sorry
Her touch made me smile through the tears
She told me she knew I was sorry and she forgave me
Scared I ask that i wanted to go with her to the promise land
I told her that I needed that one person that I trusted
She laughs in hear half giggle laugh that I missed so much
I cry harder because i am in here arms
She told me one day I will walk the garden and beat my demons
She couldnt take me just yet
She told me she couldnt hurt the ones I cared about yet
That I must hold on with all my might
That if I am scared think of me then think of christ
She said I have missed you and now she had to go
Her arms move away from me as I cry and scream "NO"
She tells me she loves me and I need to live my life
Then she disapears in a flash of light
The cross is held tight as I smile to the heavens
And thank the lord
Author notes
Grandma you were my first true amazing friend I miss u soooo much (1934-2006) She passed on valintines day
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So sorry to hear of your loss, the passing of those close to us can be so hurtful. Your words are well said.
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Awh I know how you feel. My pappy & I weren't as close as we should have been before he died, I was too into drugs and he died with not a word from me in a few months. I've changed and become a better person, thankfully. Good write
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nice write...thanks for entering
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Awww, this is so sad. I'm sorry for about your grandma. You'll always have her in your heart and you have the memories of her. Keep up the good work.
~Kayla
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This is so sad and I'm sorry for your loss. Remember all the good times you had with her. We hate to see a love one leave us but you will unite with her again some day. A good piece you have written here!
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im so sry and this poem makes me cry bcuz it is so sad im sure u miss her so and wish u could have told her everything u wanted to
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PERFECTION WHAT I HAVE BEEN WAITING TO READ FROM YOU!!! I can't say much more but this is the poem i knew you had inside you that you were trying to get out....please keep this up it is AAMAZING! Please fix up the grammar errors and it is the best you have written!!!!! I LOVE IT MUCH LOVE...scars.
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oh honey this is soooo sad. i love it though. everything you said in it was true. your mind was in the right place when you wrote this. remember that. just hold on love.you will make it through. even the dead are watching over you. they make sure the living are ok. im glad you wrote this.<3 its so nice.
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