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Not Just Some Ordinary Cuts

These are not just ordinary cuts,
That scab,
And dry,
And flake,
And heal to where they look like they weren't even there,
These are cuts that are deeply engraved in my skin,
Of all the hate and lies you put toward me,
These cuts will slowly heal to a nasty scar,
That will leave me the memory of your sick soul,
Forever.

Author notes

Ummm idk i wrote this for a nasty ex-friend.

Eeven I was amazed at how deep i got!!!

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  • lunalure
    June 8
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    4 stars

    I really like that poem!


  • Shades of Pale silver member
    June 8

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    Not meh! heh IM me... you seem upset..ish. heh. But rememeber the only reason they are mean to you is because you are soooooooooo much better than them.