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My needs

I need protection,
Especially during this recession,
There are no exceptions,
For any of my actions,
I hide in my room,
Praying this feeling will go away soon.

I need attention,
No need to mention,
What an exception,
Of fighting depression,
Working on my corrections,
Yet still pointing my self in the wrong directions.

I need peace,
A way to release,
I need to retreat,
I can't even eat,
It's these feelings that repeat,
It's something I cannot defeat.


Why do I feel so incomplete?

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  • Welcome to AllPoetry

    Poetically sad; I can relate to this on a personal level having Bipolar - I like the rhyme of this, for a moment I thought it was a little forced but as it continued I think it works well

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