My pain is to much
How could you do this to me
The pain is to much cant you see
I loved you and you loved me
we both know it was meant to be
so why you left me i shall never know
Now i cut my self watch the blood flow
slit my throat set me free
from this pain you caused me
second poem what do you think?
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frist I'm going to say this just because its true Don't hurt urself for anyone! the pain will go away The poem in its-self was very out spoken you can tell ur really hurting. keep up the writting it sounded nice you wrote it very well
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