Here's a sweet and scented wreath,
the scent of roses and beneath,
the thorns of roses bound in stealth
and stealthy petals wound in wealth
of blossoms wealthy in a wreath.
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Author notes
Flowers always make me feel good and energetic. They are an appeal to the senses and they seem to give out energy.
A contest entry
- Energy Makes Energy by individuality.
550 points, ended June 29, 16 entries
Honorable mention
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a good poem. well yeah, flowers are good, full of life's energy.
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a good piece of poetry - all neat and tidy with the rhyme, petals connected so sublime. now it is time for some lime cordial.
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lime cordial will give energy but may sap it later!! Have fun.
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stealth yields wealth but would a wreath by any other name smell as sweet? I like the decorative band of George Herbert initials.
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thank you.
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