You'll smile at my discomfort and I'll still love your smile;
our hearts are together - sounds so corny but I can't help
undress our hopes with my eyes
& I wont put us through this thing again.
I know where it will take us and it nearly killed me last time
-wont let it happen again.
In a list
A contest entry
- Acrostics by Diminished Capacity.
610 points, ended June 9, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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It's short, but it speaks in volume.
I love this line...
I know where it will take us and it nearly killed me last time
Great write. Thank you so much for entering my contest.
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A very nice acrostic indeed.
So much honesty and raw emotion in so few lines.
I loved it
thank you for sharing
good luck in the contest
keep the ink flowing
fire
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