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Masked

Something pretty; undefined
  Lips of glue
        [secrets told to no one]
Eyes hidden behind glittery mask
  [tears... fake or not... I wonder...]

I remember the face behind the mask
        so beautiful... so handsome
Where did it go?
    [vanished]

I'm tired of the lies!
  ......the deceit........

        I have asked once
When you will show your true face again
          You never answered

So I will stare at your pretty mask
With your lips of glue
Spilling sticky lies
Like sap from a tree

....and hope........

..........maybe someday......

................you'll return..........

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Another in the series...

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    June 22

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    This may have been inspired by a picture, but I can see how this can be anyone's life when trying to deal with a partner not wanting to be honest. I want to thank you for your entry into the following contest: "Already On My Favorites."

    Ted E

    PS: Your entry has been blessed by the three wise clappers, but don't spend the whole nine points in one place(lol)!


  • peaceimout
    June 9

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    You leave quite a bit for the reader to think upon. It could be words of finding self or that of a lost love. Either way you definitely spawned an excellent piece and found it a delight to read, thank you for entering and best of luck


  • OldBear34 silver member
    June 8
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    A Moving Story

    Your tale is sweetly sad.