Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Flutterby

The sensual
the sweet
The quiet beating of
Flutterby wings

The beauty
The smiles
Flutterbys fly
Miles upon Miles

The clouds come in
Bringing life's rain
And when it blows away
Flutterbys resurface again

And the rainbow
Shining in the sky
is the wake of
The little Flutterby

Author notes

picture nine love that one!
RAINbow

A contest entry

What do you think?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Jornada
    June 8

    Edit | Reply
    Lovely connection between butterflies and rainbows! We had a tandem bike flutterby encounter again the other day--one rode with us for a little while!


  • maybeillgohome
    June 8
    Edit | Reply
    AWWWW!!!!