Beneath stars
lover's kiss...
sharing hopes,
and their dreams.
Together,
they are whole,
happiness
completes them...
...so it seems.
Author notes
9 lines only
3 syllables in each line
"Spenserodian Frame"
A contest entry
- Spenserodian Frame Contest!!! by NoMoreAThought.
400 points, ended June 17, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you are quite an expert with the form poetry, but creating and writing standard forms. is this your form? at any rate the form allowed you to pen a simply beautiful artwork. it is a winner.
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A very pretty poem and form. The background works great with the image and your poem. Congratulations on winning the Silver trophy. You deserved it.
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I like the background and the magical start of love
which at the end leaves a question for the reader
to ponder upon..great work!
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Another beautifully written poem. You just keep outdoing yourself. Here is an especially spine-tingling love story that gives everyone a feeling of warmth that only you could give them. You make me smile once again. Keep up the good work.
Joan
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Great job, nice and sweet without being overly mushy.
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A beautiful write and presentation. Good flow and tone. Nice imagery. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. You paint a picture of togetherness and love and yet at the same time questioning if it is what it seems. Well penned. Best wishes in the contest.
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