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Love Lost

What do you do when the love is lost,
when your heart turns completely numb

When problems that you once could salvage,
can no longer be undone

The person that you grew to love,
you no longer even know

When you come to the place where theres nothing left
and your love can no longer grow

It's so hard to leave and say good-bye,
as you walk toward the door you begin to cry

What is it that went so wrong,
that we couldn't find a way,
how could you just watch me leave
and not beg me to stay?

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  • Welcome to Allpoetry

    I really think this piece is great. I loved it. Emotional and full of love and the loss of that as well you expressed both of them with great confidence.

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  • judy011
    June 8
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    wow

    very emtional i like good job heep it up