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Yelling and Yooyus

Two words; Altador Cup. The crowd
Goes wild. For four years, this event
Has won our hearts and souls as we
Attempt to scream and roar as loud
As our beloved turquoise techo fan
And throw occasional slushies at
The fifteen opposing teams.
(We don’t do it too often…)
We glow like fire yooyus
At the excitement
Of our favourite
Squad.
Flying,
Running,
Flapping,
They enter
The field and
Wave at us fans.
And the game begins.

Author notes

A poem written in the shape of a Trophy for my current addiction, the Altador Cup on neopets.com.
I entered this into the Poetry Gallery on neopets, and just got a mail telling me that my poem is being held over and I will be told if I make it in or not. x33

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  • Omg, I didn't realise it was a trophy shape until I read the bit at the bottom lol. Great work, and it's so cool with the shape.
    best wishes as always
    bradley


    • Ruby Petal
      June 23
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      lmao XDDD
      Thaaanks
      I'm still waiting for them to publish it~
      I hope it's soon. Someone told me that it can take up to 6 months though ):


  • Discoveria
    June 8

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    This was beautiful.

    Then I started reading the words.

    (Just kidding, it's pretty good and made me smile )