Hello hallway lover
I see you every day
you walk with your friends
I walk alone with my books
one day i will talk to you
one day i wont be so shy
i'll do something you'll see
I am someone that needs your love
or do i want your passion
the little piece of you i dream about
i wish i could just feel you
holding me so close
tenderly kissing me
whispering faint words of love
oh hallway lover
i wish you just existed
Just say anything you want
Comments
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OMG
Awwwwwwwwwww! I love it's cute sad all at the same time I love it you should keep writing <3
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Oh awesome. Your awesome. You know that? It had a great twist, and your creativity really shines out at the end. I was like: " EPIC!" But now, time to stop acting like a retard in awe.
The imagery towards the end was great, I could see it clearly, the story progresses and progresses in what is seemingly desperation. Then it finally reaches it's peak, where it turns out the Hallway Lover didn't exist.
And shyness sucks. I know. XD But opening yourself up to another person is growth, and if you are, or are not the girl, either way. It's all good. ^__^
I hope all goes well.
-Cyril Huntinghawk, aka, Ember To Inferno.
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