the day that I became your girlfriend...
It seem like yestersday when we was just bestfriends
and we told each other that no matter what we wil be there til the end
and even through we agure so much about the littlest things
my feelings for you are still the same
and will never change
beside that I say that
you make laugh and smile
all the time even when I get mad at you
you know how to make me smile
I hate that because I want to stay mad at you but I cant
but every anniversity we gonna make the best of It
each one is special because I look back on when we met each other
and never knew we would be a couple I didnt imagine that
but at the end of the day It became a true fact
but I'm glad that It did because I have a special person in my life
thats means everything to me
and I love when we have our anniversary......
It reminds me why I fall for you in the beginning and now I know why
oh my
A contest entry
- "Anniversary" by rinzurajan.
700 points, ended July 6, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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charted the journey of love so beautifully...
good luck
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It reminded me sooooo much of the relationship I'm in.
And thats why I thought it was utterly amazing, and you totally deserve that gold trophy my friend!
I'll admit, I read it fast. But my thoughts were all on the same girl while I read, I was thinking about if I were to write an anniversary poem. I loved the rhyming(when there was rhyming) and it talks alot about how it is, maybe you can improve by adding imagery or metaphors. *nods* They work really well for poems like this, just a little tip.
I hope your relationship remains strong. ^__^
- Cyril Huntinghawk aka Ember To Inferno
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