Work, kids, the house to clean
Never a moment in between
Hair frazzled, all in a tizzy
Her running round makes me dizzy
My dear this gift is just for you
When your all done you'll feel brand new
Mud bath, massage and pedicure
You'll look a million I assure
Have a great time and when your done
Hurry on home and we'll have fun
You see my special gift for you
Is actually one for me too!
A contest entry
- a quick QUICKIE by sweet arrival.
400 points, ended June 8, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nothing silly about pleasing a lady Rob, best way to both win...mystic
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I totally agree my friend!
Thanks mystic.
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mmmmmm..... lol nice soothing poem here faderman i like this hon u really did a great job
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You gotta treat your lady special if you want her to treat you special. Thanks cat!
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Thanks glen. The more you appreciate them, the more they appreciate you!
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haha oh wow you should give guys lessons in romantics
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Thanks! You got to treat the ladies right if you want them to feel the same about you.
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i like that give em stuff thats gunna make it good for you too hell away with flowers great idea nice work
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loverman!
l.o.l. that's how you do it my man! i should've grabbed my notebook so i could take notes!~
excellent, tight rhyme..great lil quickie!
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Ya gotta make them happy man! Then they make you happy and then we are all happy!
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You should hand out pamphlets of advice to all of the so-called romeos of the world, lol....pampering is always a step in the right direction
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Hey if my lady is happy I'm happy!
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Lol
Sweetly touching,filled with care,appreciation and love.
A nice write dear.
Gosh,havn't had a mud or seaweed treat in years.
S...
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Me either! But not the kind of bath for two I don't think!
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If you pamper your woman right, it always comes home to please you in the end
Thanks for your entry.
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Now I just have to find the woman! Your very welcome! I had fun.
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those gifts that keep on giving are often the best kind. lol
thank you for entering and the smile
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My pleasure! Just a little silly fun poem. I'm glad it made you smile.
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