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Black Wing, Black Wing

Black wing, black wing, we stroke in search of sleep--
the sleep that does not come to us though dark
the dark around us lies; it will not keep
this keep as safe as fortresses of art.

For art is mighty, stronger than the light
though lightly one may skip across the page--
the page that wields the weaponry of knights
who nightly ply tools of the modern age.

An age that yields more meaning in an hour--
Our danger lies in skipping over truth
for truth confesses strangely in its power.
A power that is wild does not run couth.

Uncouth it runs; the meaning is relayed
in layers that have need to be displayed.

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  • Nickelspring gold member
    June 11

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    This is so lovely. I love the imagery. That second stanza is particularly strong- I read it several times.
    Again, lovely.
    K

    • ea silver member
      June 12

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      Thank you for your attention, not only to this wreath, but to all of the wreaths I have written. It was truly an unexpected pleasure to get your reactions.

  • beautiful work here love black swans too with gravy

    • ea silver member
      June 9
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      Thank you, you'll have to write something on that for this contest, in that case.

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