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Seeds of Love...


I see you in darkness,
Where you appear as ray of light.
I see you in my loneliness,
Where I find you by my sight.

I see your hair being blown by breeze,
With your fingers swirling the water,
The stream getting freezed.

Amidst the clouds, I see the birds fly,
Your sparkling eyes move up,
Coupled with a dimpled smile.

I see you in my dreams,
When the world closes its eyes.
I find you by my side,
During the sun rise.

When the wave turns the tide,
You stay firm as a silent dove.
You know how I am
And how much I love...!

Its a dedication for someone really special!!!! :)

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  • wordsmith gold member
    June 8
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    I agree this is very sweet and tender and loving!


  • bigtooth
    June 8
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    pretty awesome stuff...!!!

    these are really the breathings of your heart...!!!

  • luvhilton
    June 8
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    i loved it

    your in love and you cant get him/her outa your head.


  • Aalta silver member
    June 8

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    Oh this is so sweet and romantic.... really beautifully written.... nice imagery and wordplay....
    Great work and a worthy dedication