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Bagels And Butties, Birthdays And Beer (An Individualtean)

Aye, 'tis birthday time for our Indi friend,
his words spark skies in boundless hue;
view splendidly his gift.
He makes us laugh and yell 'Woohoo',
other times tugs spiritual intend,
to lift spirits so swift.

Sift meaning
in deepest thoughts
and humourous, warm goodwill.

Thrills of the day, beer and bagels extend
magic rainbows, cake and old shoes.
True, this may sound adrift,
but a happy birthday for you
May somersaults and bagels soon descend
and magic swirls to lift!

Drift, leaning
'pon treasures taught.
God has given ye such skill

Spill ink, have a hearty day, chased with beer,
cheer 'hip, hip, hooray' in your birthday ear!

Author notes

I hope it's ok to enter this here I am not in the group and have not entered for a 'cup' as Ian calls them. This is just a poem for his birthday

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  • It's a sweet and wonderful birthday poem.. You know, you could always join, we're always looking for more shipmates, matey.. Thank you for entering..

  • what a wonderful birthday write ... hope your friend has a great birthday

    good luck in the contest

    xxx ~ Judie ~ xxx


  • penman gold member
    June 8
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    Wonderful

    What a great birthday poem. Such a poetic gift. Best of luck in the contest.

  • a fine individualtean poem, i may consider having a small glass of shandy on the day, perhaps half a glass, to wet the whistle. for as you know, i am tee total, it is only on rare occasions that i have a full glass. a good poem, i hope you win.

  • What a great birthday poem it is too

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