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Forever gone

She went.
Because I wanted her to go.
Wanted her to go being hurt.
For hurting her I plotted the show
Just alike a smart director would do.

She went.
She came, as used to come as friend.
But either God or Devil played in my mind.
I wished her to go and not to come back again
For I knew, a new life I was about to begin.

She went.
I knew she would come to stay this time.
She would come to gift me my heart back.
She knew I longed so long for it so cared
She came to heal but returned her eyes blurred.

She went.
She came unaware of the fact going wrong.
She didn't know when I got changed.
She came with her smile as she would come.
Not aware that I decided her to dump.

She went.
As friend she came to meet me but you see
I received her as honorable guest.
so courteous I never used to be.
As perfect host I served her food and tea.

She went.
Before going she tried to find me in me
hiding behind the mask, not seen.
Behaving like a stranger to a friend
very well could I enact till the end.


She went.
Her smiling face had gloomed before she went
I knew I could make it get her trapped
in thoughts that would not let her feel
Back to see what made me make such deal.


She went.
Not having my heart returned to me.
Knowing but it lost its worth be born,
somewhere she might have thrown it away.
Since then Heartless happy  I'm going in my way.








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2) "You never know what you've got until it's gone." unknown

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    July 15

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    so very true, we must never take anything for granted. for we always want what we dnt have and dnt have what we want. awesome write.


  • prankstar
    July 14
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    This poems detail is amazing. It really shows emotion. Thank u for entering.

    ---prankstar


  • black-phenoqu
    July 14
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    TRHIA IS VERY CONTROLLING.

    I DON'T LIKE THAT YOU REPEATED "SHE WENT" AT THE BEGINNING Of eaCH stanza.

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    July 12

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    WOW. This was really good! I loved it! I"m sorry that this happened to you. There were great emotions in this. Everything just was....AMAZING! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!