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Spilling Stars

Briskly woven cobalt flames
breathe copper threads into
piercing shades of smiling &
crying, and learning to breathe.

Crisp winter rain litters
scattered constellations
across star banks, just
like your jaded breath did
before you stopped existing.







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brisk, cobalt, flame crisp, bank, litter,

w r i t i n 0 f r e e d o m

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 8

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    No problem.



    wordbank one
    crisp, bank, litter, cobalt, pierce, flame, brisk

    wordbank two
    mantle, squeeze, maze, frontal, cornea, fleece, errupt

    wordbank three
    sphere, metabolism, freelance, parachute, fleet, bomb, marrow

    wordbank four
    cutlet, mirage, absolute, gravity, merciless, cure, alimony


    extra one if you really want one


    wordbank five
    atlas, obtain, floral, misuse, falsetto, muse, charcoal, mantlepiece, wick

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